My name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Ka pai on creating a Lorde poster! I like how you’ve used black writing on a white background - this makes it easy for the viewer of the blog to read. It’s great to see you’ve used a photo as well as writing, this is very effective. Your facts are interesting too - were there any other facts you learned about Lorde, that you didn’t use on your blog? Next time you make a cool poster like this one, you could add a bold title (for example saying ‘Lorde’) so that the viewer of the blog knows exactly what your poster is about, and it’s always good to complete your sentences, otherwise it looks a little unfinished.
I actually went to the same school as Lorde and we lived on the same street for a little while, she is one year younger than me. She is a really nice person and I remember her always being very talented at school. Do you have a favourite Lorde song?
I hope that you will keep blogging with us over the summer. Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Thank you for making a brilliant poster and keep up the great mahi! Eliza :)
Kia ora Angel, I hope you’re having a groovy day!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Ka pai on creating a Lorde poster! I like how you’ve used black writing on a white background - this makes it easy for the viewer of the blog to read. It’s great to see you’ve used a photo as well as writing, this is very effective. Your facts are interesting too - were there any other facts you learned about Lorde, that you didn’t use on your blog?
Next time you make a cool poster like this one, you could add a bold title (for example saying ‘Lorde’) so that the viewer of the blog knows exactly what your poster is about, and it’s always good to complete your sentences, otherwise it looks a little unfinished.
I actually went to the same school as Lorde and we lived on the same street for a little while, she is one year younger than me. She is a really nice person and I remember her always being very talented at school. Do you have a favourite Lorde song?
I hope that you will keep blogging with us over the summer. Keep working on the teaser week activities and on the 16th of December you can start the Week 1 activities.
Thank you for making a brilliant poster and keep up the great mahi!
Eliza :)